Sunday, October 13, 2013

TOW #5- Can We End Hunger by Eating Bugs?


In an intriguing article, Stewart M. Patrick, an expert on Global Governance, the United Nations, and Transnational threats among other worldly issues, essentially attempts to sell the idea of consuming insects to the western world. By sharing his experiences with insect consumption, implementing supporting facts, and linking words to outside sources, Patrick succeeds in making the consumption of insects a more plausible idea in the wake of impending global crisis. Although it would take more then an essay to sway the western world from their cultural values, Patrick succeeds in making the idea seem more approachable to people of western decent. Beginning with Patrick’s own exploration of a third world country, the audience is immediately introduced to eating bugs. In the western world, bugs are considered a disgusting snack intended for the poor. Patrick acknowledges the preexisting aversion by showing his personal hesitations to partake in consuming bugs. By doing so, he connects with the immediate cynical response his audience will have to the topic while additionally drawing them in to hear is argument. By making himself connectable, his audience will have an easier time accepting his ideas as a possibility, rather then immediately dismissing them as taboo. By making himself connectable and drawing his audience in, Patrick makes eating insects seem logical with facts to support it. To make the audience believe that there is a range of options, Patrick goes into the variety of edible insects with specific numbers and health facts. These facts would appeal to the western people who are health conscious, or those skeptical on health impact. The statistics provided even are supported by direct sources. Portions of the article, including different words and phrases, are strategically linked to outside sources. These sources are not just random however; they include a credible variety of news, government, and business web addresses that provide appropriate and relevant supplemental information. By providing these easily accessible sources, Patrick is able to sway his audience on the authenticity and validity of his argument. The combination of all of this however, is how Patrick is able to convey his argument with a high degree of success.

Eating Bugs
http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/nova/ants/bugs-08.html

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