Sunday, October 6, 2013

TOW #4- Comment is free No more denial. Time to act on climate change


The Guardian, a news outlet, published an editorial exposing the impact of critics on the global warming crisis. The author, whom remains unknown, outlines the different aspects of the lack of action, and why it must stop. The implementation of specific statistics, and an anecdote aid the author in conveying this point. However, the overall delivery of the text detracts from it.  The author begins the text with an anecdote relaying a hypothetical world-ending situation. Outlining the historic collaboration and effort that would be mustered into a heroic effort to save the Earth in an anecdote is purposefully implemented as a comparison. The author juxtaposes the hypothetical anecdote against the current lack of action that is reality. Following this with facts and statistics, she leads her audience to examine the lack of logic in the situation. The statistics are used as evidence of global warming, and the anecdote is made out to be a contradiction to what should be done to stop it.  The audience, any unsure person or critic, is then lead to wonder why there have been no efforts to stop it, if all of this evidence indeed exists. The author then points the blame at the skeptics in the government, citing specific government officials and their naïve decisions as proof.  However, the presentation of the argument and devices reveals itself to be the fatal flaw. With the inclusion of the arguments, the author fails to cite his or her source. Thus, the audience whom the author intends to sway to his or her side cannot be certain that the statistics are accurate. Additionally, the exclusion of the author’s identity contributes to a lack of credibility, therefore dismissing any brilliant use of rhetoric. While the author would have successfully been able to sway any uncertain or skeptical person, the lack of credibility distracted from the overall argument. 


Global Warming
http://fabiusmaximus.com/2012/12/10/mother-jones-polar-global-warming-46664/ 


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